Love Song
Life's supended
Frozen feelings - This is my
Interaction
Fire burning
Liquid stirring - Calling to me
Satisfaction
Hope awaits
Touch responds to your caress
Attraction
Your eyes on me
I see the look and to me come
Fearless thoughts - my sanction
Sanctity is not for me
This craze for you stands undenied
In some fraction
Hear me now
For the wait is done - I break my mould
With steps in air, I gasp, my breath...
Rarefaction
Pretty girl
Goes back to sleep
Snuggling now
Heads to dreams
This is my
Last action.
~*~*~*~
Frozen feelings - This is my
Interaction
Fire burning
Liquid stirring - Calling to me
Satisfaction
Hope awaits
Touch responds to your caress
Attraction
Your eyes on me
I see the look and to me come
Fearless thoughts - my sanction
Sanctity is not for me
This craze for you stands undenied
In some fraction
Hear me now
For the wait is done - I break my mould
With steps in air, I gasp, my breath...
Rarefaction
Pretty girl
Goes back to sleep
Snuggling now
Heads to dreams
This is my
Last action.
~*~*~*~
posted by Camphor at 11:19 PM
4 Comments:
nice lines...are these your own
Yeah, they are my own. :)
mtt ~ wow! thanks. :D Wrote is fast. Like all my poetry. It actually has a tune to it. :D
good work.
u ahve included so many things in one poem: interaction, satisfaction, attarction,fraction.....
Its nice to put yorself in poem. i never tried to write about my self. I think now i will try.
Actualy i write poems some times. But i am not so gud in this.
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